you came to me again,
this time for real, and not in my dream,
your words touched me just as before,
you reached me again,
where my heart left you the key,
-it's been flying lost without you,
over our precious places where we once lay,
and through the skies, in dreams, in all my days,
I am still reaching you,
holding on to something so precious.
3pm and your words ring through me,
was I dreaming, or did you touch my heart one more time,
you still beat within me
though I am living a life far away
the vision is feint, the voice distant, the life remote,
but somehow we relate,
over the miles,
over the lands, stretching painfully, joining hands,
your voice echoes through me, closing my eyes,
never wanting to see today,
treasuring all that I hold in my hands,
one side warming me,
the other warning me,
within is without,
without is within,
to begin, without a finish,
to finish, with or without,
motions stop...autumn overtakes me,
hesitating, awaiting the place where the leaves shall rest.
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- 08/09/2005 @ 10:35:38
I like it!
Thank you for sharing it with me also.
Words are powerful, together with feelings.
Keep writing all!
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- 09/09/2005 @ 14:50:52
wonderful poem written beautifully. keep up baby. keep wrtting such beautiful poems so that all can read and appreciate.
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- 10/09/2005 @ 09:30:34
Thanks sooo much, I will do!^^
JT1124
this make me think of a song i listen recently ...
"You Took My Heart Away"
By MICHAEL LEARNS TO ROCK
Staring at the moon so blue
Turning all my thoughts to you
I was without hopes or dreams
I tried to dull an inner scream but you
saw me through
Walking on a path of air
See your faces everywhere
As you melt this heart of stone
you take my hand to guide me home and now
I'm in love
[Chorus:] You took my heart away
when my whole world was gray
You gave me everything
and a little bit more
And when it's cold at night
and you sleep by my side
you become the meaning of my life
Living in a world so cold
you are there to warm my soul
You came to mend a broken heart
You gave my life a brand new start and now
I'm in love
[Chorus:]
You took...
Holding your hand
I won't fear tomorrow
Here were we stand
we'll never be alone